love it very descriptive story about kiwi kid sophie from ebony
well done Mason, I really enjoyed your writing :-)
Harris I really enjoyed reading your story"what makes a kiwi kid"?You really do love your sausages in tomato sauce!!! MUM
I enjoyed reading my story to mum and dad
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good job Jack Hart
good job Jack craig I like the similes
Great descriptive story Jack Hart :) Well done!