We look forward to watching you swim at the Olympics in a few years :)
well done daniel we hope you will be at the olympic games soon :)
lots of rich language :)
awesome story :)
good writing
Awesome writing we might even see you at the olympics in2020Janaya
Cool story bro
Awesome story we might even see you at the olympics in Rio 2016Anna :)
You da bomb
You rock
Heaps of rich language Jo O`Connor
#1 story
I love your story
your story is awesome
guess what room 1 have got 39 points for the blog competition and thats only for Daniel and Taylas stories
weel done daniel l reallt enjoyed it and l hope we will see u in th eolympics.Nice interesting words and feelings.
This is the 50th comment for only Tayla and Daniels story that's pretty good guys keep it up!! We need more things to comment on like minipulted and static images or some cool stories
you rock
lots of fellings
We look forward to watching you swim at the Olympics in a few years :)
ReplyDeletewell done daniel we hope you will be at the olympic games soon :)
ReplyDeletelots of rich language :)
ReplyDeleteawesome story :)
ReplyDeletegood writing
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing we might even see you at the olympics in2020
ReplyDeleteJanaya
Cool story bro
ReplyDeleteAwesome story we might even see you at the olympics in Rio 2016
ReplyDeleteAnna :)
You da bomb
ReplyDeleteYou rock
ReplyDeleteHeaps of rich language
ReplyDeleteJo O`Connor
#1 story
ReplyDeleteI love your story
ReplyDeleteyour story is awesome
ReplyDeleteguess what room 1 have got 39 points for the blog competition and thats only for Daniel and Taylas stories
ReplyDeleteweel done daniel l reallt enjoyed it and l hope we will see u in th eolympics.Nice interesting words and feelings.
ReplyDeleteThis is the 50th comment for only Tayla and Daniels story that's pretty good guys keep it up!! We need more things to comment on like minipulted and static images or some cool stories
ReplyDeleteyou rock
ReplyDeletelots of fellings
ReplyDelete